Rushes/Editing

Pros:

• A fair amount of angles and framing has been considered
• A few locations are included
  
• Tried to use as many props as possible
• Good natural lighting
  

Cons:

• Too many lengthy shots, especially of the actor walking
  
• Includes very common locations
• Hadn't planned out whether we filmed each shot at every possible angle available
• Haven't shot the important scenes which indicate the twist in the plot
• Props haven't been powerful enough to set the genre
• Ideal to shoot a couple of shots again
  

The scene of 'Jimmy' walking towards his flats has been edited so far, taking up at least 30-40 seconds which could feel a little lengthened but with the help of the monologue (which is yet to be read out and recorded) will make it more interesting. We need to edit a lot more in order to show that we've edited as much as we should have since of the deadline of the rushes.