Francesca - rather lazy - very little - level one!
Lisa - better but none of your own independent research - high 2
Tahsina - you have done some of your own research - High 2 / low 3.
All of you need to consider that this is a blog. it looks far too like an essay. Walls of text! Break it upm, introduce screen grabs for emphasise and interest, insert links to the films, have a MULTI MEDIA approach. You need to suggest how you are inspired by the films you have seen.
Lots to do if you want to maximise your planning grade,
Francesca - rather lazy - very little - level one!
ReplyDeleteLisa - better but none of your own independent research - high 2
Tahsina - you have done some of your own research - High 2 / low 3.
All of you need to consider that this is a blog. it looks far too like an essay. Walls of text! Break it upm, introduce screen grabs for emphasise and interest, insert links to the films, have a MULTI MEDIA approach. You need to suggest how you are inspired by the films you have seen.
Lots to do if you want to maximise your planning grade,