- I laid the writing out in three columns which Little White Lies mostly structure their reviews in.
- The coloured boxes beneath the photo with the information about director/actors/release date indicate the colour scheme of the film.
- I originally displayed two hearts in the bottom corner near the page number but it was removed due to not being significant to what would related to a popular movie on the cover of the magazine.
overall bit short.
ReplyDeleteformat to 20 x 24.5 cm
You repeat gripping twice in your ratings
no fine details at bottom of pages
Anonymous title - choose approp font
I think overall, you need to decide on your tense.
You need more on the plot
Some papragraphs are confusing.
I will feedback direct on Monday.